My mind negates the patience of my heart..
It has been doing so ever since the start..
On one pan,is my bountiless love..
On the other lies the betrayal now..
I thought a touch is never to forget..
Unless the angel of death you have met..
I thought our bond to be damn perfect..
My heart didn't belong to a different sect..
I thought I have you always by my side..
Through the serenity and then through the tide..
A look behind and it all was fake..
My entire being at a dire stake..
Every heartbeat existed because of you..
Your presence instilled in me life anew..
I felt surrounded by a protective sheath..
My feet hardly touched the soil beneath..
Solace in your arms I always found..
But now my world is shattered and all ground!!
I am hurt and I am left all alone..
My heart turned into a lifeless stone..
But I am alive because I love..
It has been so before and it is so now..
A single tear from your eyes..
Washes away all your lies..
But I promise you for the rest of our life..
I'll be with you through smile and strife..
16 comments:
the moment i saw it,the next i read
it is good, no it is great
shows ur feelings about your soulmate
its somewhere good nd somewhere bad
but in end makes one sad
Such comments I get very few..
But I am not sure whether I know you..
This comment gave me a good feel..
Who you are could you please reveal..
for your poem i must say calmness and glory,
and about my identity
i want to say
sorry sorry :)
Let me tell you that this is very bad..
Your reply made me feel sad..
I really want to know who you are..
Someone so near or anyone quite far..
Now don't make any excuse, tell me please..
On my lips, that would bring some cheese :D
your poems deserve a big round of applause..
for who am i , you can browse..
your curiosity is generous and utter..
but i will not moved by your words filled with butter :)
let's see how much time you will take..
if u finds me then i offer you a cake :)
and sorry for the grammatical mistakes...
:D
Thanks for appreciating my writing..
And as for the cake.. Sorry.. I am dieting..
You keep on praising my poems with a kind word..
And I don't mind you being a human or a bird..
Let it be that you are one admirer so strange..
And I appreciate if it would never change..
Take care for now and keep up with the comments..
Drive your car slowly so that it gets no dents :D
Bye
ha ha
hold your thoughts nd apply some brake..
i know you are on a diet,hmm
how about a sugarfree-low fat cake..
dont worry about the dent,that is way too far..
beacause i dont hav mine own car..
keep on rocking not a gump
CAUTION! go slow there is a speed bump :)
Oh.. I got to know who you are..
And I know that you don't have a car..
Don't try to be poetic because you can't..
Go give the sugar-free cake to your aunt..
he he.. To reveal your identity, I took a minute or two..
And I knew that it would have been you..
I am not worried about the bumps, I fly in the air.
For rest of the world, I give a damn care..
SORRY ?
Ecjactly!!
excuse me mam!!
Excused!
i am not getting this sudden change in behavior of yours
Lovely thread of comments you have thus far...
Got the loony empty feeling of the poem out of the door ajar..
Pardon my sense of rhyme..
Couldn't help writing a line to this old friend of mine..
:)
@ Rajiv:
Mail me at samaruh@gmail.com
A good one to read I am impressed :)
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